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Re: Fledgling: a Short Story, Pt. 2/2
The plot was good lol I loved it...there's a bit of humour in there and that's what made the story more enjoyable. I really like the way it all went ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: star dust (chapter1)
OMG I love the way you portrayed the main character here...she's sooo lovable! :D :D And funny, like the whole description about her little brother thinking he's older then her ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Renesmee Cullen
Hey...I really liked this :D I'm not even going to bother trying to correct the spelling and the grammar since um...Eddie?...did that already but yeah. Structure, new paragraph for every ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: The Pain Inside </3
I can tell how much emotion went into this :) I like it...people can relate and I guess that's what makes it more enjoyable :)
Jul 17, 2010