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Chapter 5 Sunday morning was usually spent in Derrick’s cozy garage and today was no exception. It was usually early in the morning when we were all meant to go ...

I love this :D The descriptions are perfect, it's like I can picture everything that goes on. The opening is fantastic, it drags the reader in and completely sets the ...

Chapter 4 “You were right,” I said into my phone urgently as I pulled on my jacket leaning the phone against my shoulder, “You were right about everything and right ...

Hey sorry for the late review :) I was kinda busy buuuttt Im here now so let's get cracking!! :D Well first things first, Yes I like where this is ...

Excellent :D

Hey...I like the idea, sounds good and interesting. So I'm interested in how you develop it :) Well you don't have issues in grammar, that I'm aware of, but there ...

Intrigued. This is a good chapter and I like the characterization :) the only problem is, in the first paragraph of the first chapter Don was talking about Religion class ...

Chapter 3 “How was your trip?” I gritted my teeth and tried to focus on my final accounts while trying to ignore the annoying voice of my “bully” Kyle. He ...

I really like this story!!! I've read all ten chapters just now lol The plot is really appealing and it's so unique and really good. I can't wait for the ...

Hey honey :P Well thank you for your awesome reviews so I'm going to review you back :D Well first thing's first...red is the correction.blue is grammar correction. A street ...

Heyy thanks for the review :D I'll look over the chapter and edit some stuff out. And yeah I know...I'm trying to use the cliche approach AT THE START haha, ...

Chapter 2 I tried to ignore the smirks I was getting as I stood in the canteen queue at break time, I managed to buy my lunch and stumbled to ...

haha this is cute :D I LOVE the lyrics :D :D they capture emotion and of course the fact that they're funny makes it appealing. It sucks the way you ...

The plot was good lol I loved it...there's a bit of humour in there and that's what made the story more enjoyable. I really like the way it all went ...

OMG I love the way you portrayed the main character here...she's sooo lovable! :D :D And funny, like the whole description about her little brother thinking he's older then her ...