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Hey :D Thanks for the revieww :D :D Shit yeah- I might need to change that part- don't want to make it sound predictable :L Thanks for the advice :D ...

Well I got a few things to say :D You are a really good writer :D I love this story. And the way you developed your main character and David!! ...

Chapter 7 I arrived at Vanessa's doorstep feeling nervous. I didn't know what she had in mind for today's meeting and it scared me. With good reason, any time Vanessa ...

:O I LOVEE the message in this poem :) It's so true, all of us are still human no matter where we are, (if that's the message in this poem ...

Oh and I LOVE the cover by the way :D :D

Heyy ;) I'm here to review your work :D Well so far- the story is great :D It gets kind of confusing in the end but I'm sure that with ...

Heyy :) Sorry it took me so long to answer back to your request. But here I am now ;) Hmm- this chapter is great- there's a load of vivid ...

Ooh a deadly fantasy romance novel :D :D This is reallyy good :D "Did you hear that, you over confident scum bag? She. Doesn't . Like. You." That was the ...

I really like this :D You wrote it so well :O like you captured exactly how Kim and Josh were feeling :D and I liked that- the way you showed ...

I love the start of this poem- it's so attention grabbing and really sets the mood to the poem. "Discreditable of existence, unworthy of more than a sentence" I love ...

I know this is for 18s but screw it. I like the title :) it reallyy catches your attention. It's probably the first thing i noticed before I clicked on ...

Thank you :D :D :D thanks for the reviews :D xxxxx

Oh right yeah I know this version is kinda crap but I rewrote this under a different title, "The Demented Angel" I still don't know how to delete this. lol

Hey :) welcome to YWS xD I really like the preface :O it was short and straight to the point. Main character who's in love with Jason. That ' s ...

She lay pale and covered in sweat that reflected the candlelight dancing along the walls. Her dirty, blonde hair surrounded her in damp locks. Her eyelids fluttered tiredly. Her mouth ...