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Re: I need opinions!
I like the sound of this. I love the idea of an animal story, sounds interesting. Yeah what ItalianIlluminist said, just take out the exclamation mark, it makes it look ...
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: Your Views on Homosexuality
My theory is that the only reason people think of homosexuality as being inferior to heterosexuality is because it's different. I don't think it should be. Like in Greek times ...
Feb 13, 2012 -
Re: Character How-do-you-dos
Hi. I'm Angel Carter. I am infected, my blood runs black in my veins and my mind tells me to kill. I was sent from my home town into an ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: I Love You Preface
Hey you :) I really hope you wouldn't take anything to heart. Just here to give a tiny bit of help :P I got to say that I LOVE your ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: She's Such a Drama Queen Chapter 11
Chapter 11 “I think I know where you’re going wrong with this look,” said Vanessa thoughtfully as we sat in her messy bedroom. A week had gone by since mine ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen chapter 10
Chapter 10 I woke up on Monday morning at six o’clock promising to be a whole new different person. The list of things I should and shouldn’t do in public ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: The Betrayed Angel- Chapter 1
Chapter 1 Faker Fog swirled around us as we stood in one of the abandoned New Lock alleyways waiting for my fake IDs. I watched the obscured distance of the ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Smoke and Fire: Two
Hey :P I love your writing! It's so detailed and descriptive and each sentence smoothly runs into the next. You have a really cool plot coming on and I really ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
Hey Well I don't have any negative comments about this :O This is just pure amazing! The opening drew me in instantly! I LOVE the way you describe the whole ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: A brief history of boys I fancied as a teenager
hahaha this is actually one of the most awesome things I have ever read! It's obviously you describing your past crushes and it really gets your readers thinking about their ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Chapter 9
Chapter 9 “How do you honestly think I did?” I asked Vanessa anxiously as we climbed off the crowded train and made our way down the road towards her house. ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Chapter 8
Chapter 8 When the door slammed shut behind me I found myself standing on a huge wooden stage looking out at the circular theatre room filled with judgmental teenagers- most ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Twelve
Well I don't know if my review would be any use- this is the first chapter that I've read out of your story and I can say that I love ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Evil Angel Chapters 1 & 2
Hey :D Well I LOVE the first chapter :O it's amazing! It totally grabbed my attention from the first paragraph! :O The character of Raiden seems like an awesome big ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Prologue
haha thanks :D :D :D Chapter 1-7 already up :P if u see any mistakes feel free to let me know :P xx
Mar 15, 2011