Akisha

Your welcome! And thanks again for donating those points to me! :D Its so easy to pick out all of the negative things when reading people's stories. So I tried ...

I'm speechless. :o Your drawings are absolutely amazing! Hmmm...how can I become this good :-k

:lol: Very good! And the drawings are really cool!

Excellent! I like it...i like it a lot :thumb:

The opening paragraph is good. The pace throughout the two chapters is perfect, not too fast or too slow. "The closer it was to the bus, the faster it seemed ...

I'm in work at the moment so I printed this out. I'll get back to you as soon as I've read it :)

^dislikes Harry Potter :roll:

One of her boobies looks bigger than the other tee hee :lol: Nah its really good...sorry, i'm a weirdo :oops:

Its good but the nose looks slightly out of proportion and the eyes look a bit small. :)

The Melvins-Melvinmania.

pentium. Lions or Tigers?

^likes Harry Potter(like,who doesn't! 8) )

We studied Romeo and Juliet in school. It was a little confusing at first but you get used to it after a while and it became very enjoyable. I also ...

I haven't read any of those books but my friend told me that Angels and Demons is a very good book. I might read it myself.

Its good, you're a good writer. I agree with misty lynn though, the ending is a little weak. But its still very good. :)