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AkiKerosin

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Father

    Aw, thanks for the nice reviews, guys. =3 And I suppose that confusion is understandable, Fiction, because my father left me AND died . . . so I guess you ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Father

    Written very much on the spot . . . I dislike Father's Day. =/ Father, Father, tell me why You’d rather sleep inside the sky Than by the woman that ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Other Re: Dawn Reports 10

    I believe the usual statistics for dreams is something around forgetting 95% of them. As mentioned above, most are average things that don't catch our attention; simple things, like tying ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Other Re: Dawn Reports 1

    -recruited- I love your word choicing here. It seems sort of like the opening words of an important experiment or adventure. It has that certain almost hungering voice to it. ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Other Re: Innocence

    This piece IS highly, highly opinionated . . . which is why I call it more of a rant than anything. So I can understand if you disagree. But at ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Other Re: Innocence

    I found this buried in my documents . . . it's a little ranty to me, but eh. Once again, I have little I can do with it. ~ Innocence--most ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Chance Flake

    Kind of a random tidbit . . . ~ Every little star Falling from the black; White in the hanging tar; What you do, where you are, The chance you ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Flames for the Zenith

    I also make my sentences tediously long so that you have to read them like SIXTY-TWO TIMES to understand. -self critism FTW- And I was actually worried it wouldn't be ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Flames for the Zenith

    I was poking around my old documents, looking for something I had already written recently enough . . . so I could maybe get across my style. This is actually ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Yo, yo, yo YORU!

    @ my neighbor =p I had a dream that all my animals had to be left at my aunt's house, and the bunnies kept jumping over the fence, and the ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Yo, yo, yo YORU!

    . . . the title is clearly an attention hook. Sooo, I've been writing since I was around ten. My writings usually take on a supernatural turn, especially having to ...

    Jun 8, 2010


Half the work that is done in this world is to make things appear what they are not.
— Elias Root Beadle