Aiva

The imagery!! Wow. It's stunning. I'm in love with it. It's hard to explain why... things that are obscure like what you presented in your poem makes it sort of ...

I've been in a really happy mood lately, so I wrote this song. I don't really think there'd be ANYONE who would ever sing this song, excluding myself, but whatever. ...

I like it as a blurb, and as you suggested, as a signature. but as a poem, it'd be cool to see it expanded into a longer one, to see ...

It's really interesting. I'm a newbie when it comes to poetry, but I like the different way you wrote it. It's new to me. But I like it. It's just ...

That was fabulous! It was witty and funny and enjoyable to read! You're a fantastic rhymer as well! Good work.

It doesn't really have a title, and I can't think of one right now...So, here it is! Working Title: Enjoy See the world through another's eyes, Whether they be old, ...

Interesting. There were several grammatical and spelling mistakes. Punctuation, like commas, were left out and it almost made the story a bit hard to follow. Things were also repeated a ...

Wow, you did a tremendous job. There were a couple of things I noticed, but the other critiquers already said them. I'm a complete fan of vampires, and I think ...

Hey, I actually really like it. But, like everyone else is saying, the story is a bit hard to follow, but only because the punctuation was a bit off. But, ...

“Dentist,” he mumbled, his eyes flickering over me. I squashed an irrepressible urge to shout “Boo!” I love that! I actually really like this. So far, nothing to critique but ...

Hehe, um.....Hi. Yeah, I'm Aiva. It isn't my real name, but I think Aiva sounds so much more cooler than my own...um...I think I'm completely in love with this site, ...