Aiva

Blast, I'm not a poetry critic either, but I must say that that was extremely beautiful. You have a really nice gift. :) And though in childhood we oft times ...

I think it's pretty cool! If you read it over again, you'll catch all of the grammar and spelling mistakes, but all in all, it's a good start. It is ...

*Holds breath* I hope it's good, for the amount of time I spent on it!! Here it is, finally!! Chapter 2 “Thanks, everyone, for coming out to watch our show. ...

Yeah- I knew I heard that name before, but I couldn't figure out where. I think I might change it later. Thanks for the comments!!

Thanks so much for the input! I'm glad you all like this one better. I wasn't sure about the spacing, but now that it's been pointed out, I'll be sure ...

She’s cute; I approve!” Kaden stated, rubbing his hands together. “Hey, not so fast there, Kaden. You know the rules. This is work, not free time,” Ronan stated warningly. Kaden ...

So, hopefully, this one is better than the last one! It's much more creative and less info-dumpy than the last two. I do a LOT more showing than telling to, ...

Thank you so much everyone!! I'm so happy people actually like it! Heh, how's that for being confident?... Once I finish the revised and finished copy of the first draft, ...

Yeah, exactly. It's a cliche, and it's been used millions of times :smt010 Hehe.

Thanks for your thoughts!! I'm sort of excited to see what people have to say about this. It's going to be hard: Some people like fast-paced, some don't. But for ...

Yes, yes, I'm aware of everything extremely terrible in my icky poem. It's supposed to be indistinguishable. It was something I spent about 5 minutes on, counting looking for things ...

Thanks for the input! And I understand where you're all coming from. Next time, when I'm seriously thinking about writing a poem, your suggestions a comment will be the first ...

Yeah, I just wrote this, for no apparent reason. It was something where I locked myself up in my room, grabbed a notebook, and jotted down anything that came out ...

No, I thank you very much for it!! I asked people to be harsh. Like I said, I haven't done any planning with this story at all. The characters appearances ...

Here's the next section! So far, this story is still in the "ideas coming out too fast/pre-writing" part of my mind. So, right now, I'm looking for as much criticism ...