Aisho

I quite liked the world you've begun to set up; it's very Hollywood. I would like to point out that a little more attention should be paid to your formatting--there's ...

I enjoyed it immensely; I have a soft spot for vague characterizations. Quite possibly my only problem with the entire piece was that you tended to make your sentences very ...

How awkward--a newbie once more! :D I'm Aisho. I love to write, but I'm tentative to share my works, so I thought perhaps a short interlude with an online forum ...