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  • Lyric Poetry Re: It's Been A While

    The message was great, I did enjoy reading this. However, I noticed a complete lack of rhythm and rhyme schemes, in other words, this isn't a lyrical poem, rather, it's ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Immortality of Her Sweet Embrace

    First of all, let me say that I am simply bursting with a mixture of adoration, envy, and pure poetic ecstacy. The wording was amazing beyond all description, because I'm ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: HeartBeat

    Let me first say that poetry in its most basic definiton is any writing that evokes a deep emotional response within the reader, and as far as that is concerned, ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Perfect Night

    Holding on to you Like I will never see you again. Never wanting to Go back to the way things have been. For every embrace we have shared We beheld ...

    Sep 23, 2010


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