Aianarie

Ha! This is awesome, and so, so true! Although I personally like the color red because it symbolizes love and romance. Maybe you should add another paragraph talking about the ...

Okay, this is a good poem. I like the ideas presented here, though slightly prosaic, the elements are well arranged. However, I think that your lines are a bit off-balanced. ...

Hmm, nice poem, the emotion is captured well. I think you should make it longer...extend it! I love sad poems like this when they are really long and kind of ...

The Hero’s Violet by Aianarie A violet growing in the deep forest, As blue as a clear summer sky, And guarding its radiant beauty; The valiant raven’s proud cry. On ...