Aianarie

Shh, dost thou hear the sweet melody? Of the ocarina, echoing through The deep forest of ages past Created by power, tended by wisdom; With courage and love. - Keen ...

Alas, fair adventurer, what dost thou seek? Nay, be not a passer-by; Come, come bathe in my fountain. Pay naught to me in your repose; Close thy eyes and let ...

This is a sonnet that is part of a 7-sonnet "mini-epic" about different aspects of life. This one in particular is just one of my favorites. I might post the ...

Ooh, very nice. This poem flows beautifully, and the rhythm is excellent. I can definitely tell that this is a personal poem, bless your heart for what you are/had been ...

Nice lyrics! (shouldn't this be in the lyrics section though?) Definitely not very country-ish, but still good. To me it seems more like rock or maybe soft rock.

This is a really cool poem. The rhythm is even, which is something that I really look for in a poem. It should sound right when you read it out ...

Nice poem, not bad! I like the idea of it, and your spelling and grammar looks good. But I will mention that your poem's layout is kind of awkward, I ...

Thank you, everyone, for your comments. I have taken your suggestions into consideration for future reference. I will mention though that I kind of have my own idea of structure. ...

So here's a little something I wrote a week ago after enduring a painfully cold day at school. (Ha ha) Well the chill sparked an idea for this amusing poem. ...

Hmm, I like the story here, emotional (it's sad!), but the poem's style is a little boring. I think you need to add more imagery, integrate some interesting word usage, ...

Nice work! This poem has an intriguing look and sound to it. Remember to double-check your grammar and spelling!

Hmm, well I can't say this is quite my style of poem, but it is indeed interesting. I do, however, like the lines that are in between the boom-boom lines. ...

Wow, this poem kind of scares me. Ha ha, no, it's beautiful. So simple, and mysterious. I particularly like the imagery, which is usually my favorite aspect of poem. I ...

Well I have been here for a while, but never really posted anything until now, so hello everyone! You'll see me mostly here in the poetry section. I'll begin with ...

Oh wow, that was soooo beautiful! It's not difficult to get me transfixed within the lines of good poetry or literature, but you sure did it well! The imagery and ...