AeryqtheKidd

Think you all for your comments and compliments. I'm glad to know that I did well on my poem. I do see that a couple beats are too long, and ...

I like this poem; I'm a fan of these sorts of poems. But, I believe there are things you should look for when writing like this. For one, your spacing. ...

They whisper and they converse about the lovely bride to be. They marvel and they wonder how you could end up with me. But love's all that's important; not their ...