Aeropostale

Scratch this... I will read it later, but thanks for the next part!

Well, the chapters are extremely short. You also cannot tell who is saying what... These are most of the errors. Interesting storyline though. Lots of shootings. Haha, also there was, ...

Haha, thanks.

I added to the first chapter the description of an NVA.

This is the best story I have read on this website! Just like the post above, I was immersed from the first letter to the last period! This is a ...

Well now, that makes sense. Good idea to add a warning at the beginning. :)

Chapter 2 is out!

Chapter 1: My next chapter in my saga! Chapter 2: Missing August 9th 1963, 0600 Hours As the sun rises on our makeshift grass + branch tents, the tight grip ...

I am liking the captured soldier part. Not the test. I will base it in the morning and they discover that he is gone. Pvt. James. :)

Post what you want to be included in further chapters! :) - Just added that to the OP -

:) Thanks.

Did you use Photoshop or MS Paint? This is pretty good if you used Paint. :)

Damion Kale lounged comfortably in a gilded chair of brass - I find that gilded means gold-plated. Why not just make it gold? - , the needle-sharp point of a ...

Awesome! Wow, that is the kindest review yet! Thank you! To the MaskedPoet: I do not chat via MSN. I will only communicate by PM.

Thanks for the review. I will edit all the points you have just mentioned. The reason I did not add names to the soldiers said yet, was because I wanted ...