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Aedomir

  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    Aedomir vs. Urkla Aedomir smashed a heavy blow into the troll's side. It roared and leapt apart, sending Aedomir soaring into the sky like a canonball. He came down with ...

    Feb 9, 2008
  • Archive Re: Milkman! Random Superheroes!

    Storyline Barry Halley has just been bitten by a radioactive cow. He turned into... MILKMAN! Soon after, he discovered that his archenemy, Postman, is gathering an army to rival Milkman. ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Archive Re: Sucked into YWS

    cool! Username: Aedomir Sibs: NONE Mini-animal: Horse Sucked in from: Office Landed in: Aedomir's main story, The Immortals, Advanced Critiques Specific: Fighting to get out of my topic. description:

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Archive Re: Be You

    Mark "Shut up!" I smacked the alarm with a clenched fist, and before I knew what I was doing, it was on the floor in several pieces. "Oh! Stupid BBC ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    ~Urkla vs Aedomir~ Urkla carried his weight up the mountainside, hundreds of Goblins leaping savagley behind him. The exiles were scattered into afrenzies of one-on-one combats. There, in the core ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Horizon and Beyond

    ~ Aedomir ~ Aedomir made is way into the crowd, snatching a wine goblet in the process. Do hope the entrance wasn't too... Dramatic He thought, taking a sip of ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    (you are always welcome to join!)

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Horizon and Beyond

    Advisor pens opened his mouth to speak, careful not to give anything away. Everyone turned to him, and the chattering subsided. There was a beat of hooves on the ground, ...

    Feb 7, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    Aedomir's strides speeded up. His heart pounded heavily against his chest and his blood raced through his veins. The blur of goblins closed in, their foul stenches meeting Aedomir head ...

    Feb 7, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    (ye, everyone dies! woo! :-D if you want to write 1st person, thats fine, just put it on italics and say who you are talking about just beforehand.)

    Feb 7, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    Having said that, if your guy splits off from the rest of the group, you will cotnrol him. That sort of thing.

    Feb 7, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    Ye, I wanted active control really, you say what the guy is doing and work from that, but ye, just 3rd person from ur POV will be fine, its just ...

    Feb 7, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    (let's start!) Aedomir sat on the log, admiring the roaring flames as they leapt high into the night sky. He could hear the sound of footsteps closing in, and heavy ...

    Feb 7, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Whining Arrow

    thats clever! I think we'll do just that: red for evil team blue for allied team green for when they meet. And can we not have a storybook, where you ...

    Feb 7, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Horizon and Beyond

    (When will all the heroes be summoned? Could someone tell me when. I want my character to storm in)

    Feb 7, 2008


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