Aedomir

I loved this updated version. I can't remeber what the old one was like but let me tell you how much I adore that first paragraph. Others may diagree but ...

I just reqalised you posted two more. I love them!

Introduction Hello everyone! This is the new progress file for my novel. If you know the story you will know I am going through a name crisis. My original title ...

76 in... I was only that made when I first started! Then I went mental.

A mushroom? What?!

I don't mean to patronise, but there is a PHBB help and support forum in case you are having trouble there. You probably knew that already, but still.

I have read your first, I just thought I would put the crit here: General Impressions Loved it. There's no other way of putting it, just that I loved it. ...

If there was a war against any country in the world I would stand and fight for us, but I would never pledge allegiance to the Queen. 1) She has ...

This is just a storybook for you to let rip! I made it fantasy basically so there is no plot to abide by, nor the name of any cities, no ...

Erm... thanks for the crit but have you got against Aedomir?! He will grow on in the story trust me. Put it this way, he is confused about what is ...

I hate it too, ignore this part, lol.

Thanks very much everyone! That's really great if you like it!

I agree. People who often see homosexuality as a problem, have nothing better to say, than as if gay is an offensive term.

1) "That". 2) A room 3) Johnny 4) Silence A guessed number 2, lol.

'Gay' isn't an insult. Unforunately, it is for homophobes.