Aedomir

*yay someone revived it! thank you!* ~Aedomir~ The road to Helm's Deep was slow, even under the pressure to move out. Aedomir bore his armour gracefully, and was forced to ...

Wow, that's a thought... I knew that about the adjectives, but for some reason they just go down without me thinking. I will fix that! I may or may not ...

The first two aren't exactly good but the firts one's cute! I love the tree!

I like the idea behind it but I reckon you make it more catchy. Still, I like it. It seems like either a romance or a... teenager's romance! I don't ...

LOL! I love that cat! Now we are mad!

Will this help?

Oh yes! I want all the crits I can get, thanks for them. This is chapter one as well, the first 3 chapters I am rewriting. That is up to ...

Hey! I'm Mark! I won't echo what others have said, just have a great time and let me know ehn you post your first piece! :smt039 See you about! ~Mark

That is great! Thanks, as I have said, I hate this most likely more than you and I feel I can myself love it too. Thank you!

Hiya, I know this was put up ages ago, but I love descriptive pieces, so do you mind if I take a peek...? A sliver of night descended the bluff ...

Just a quick note here, but this isn't a debate. What's going on?!

10/10 cute! 'Tis funny...

Wow Wolf! That must have taken forever to write! Thnaks very much I really appreciate it. I have always had troubles with characterization, I really need to improve on that. ...

Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it. Would it be like someone finding the diary in third person, and then they sit down to read it and that's when ...

Part One I think I scanned this over a day or two ago when you put it up. growled the one who'd threatened me with the knife This sounds awkward ...