Aedomir

Well, I am on my first 'whole' draft, but I have rewritten chpter one five times and I am still not happy. I decided to just move on and rewrite ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Hiya! staring at her carpeted floor . With a su r prised yelp she fell to floor . Two uses of the world 'floor'. hieght 'height' studeid 'studied' Suddenly, she ...

That is horrible! I love cats! I feel sick now, someone should stick a knife into his stomache.

~Aedomir I carefully left my horse and proceeded to the knight's tower. While the outside showed signs of a sordid negligence, the inside still showed signs of majesty and wonder. ...

It's supposed to be looking to the right, or its left.

This sounds good, what is the story like? Is there like a main plot?

Hi! May I be the first to say hello! My name is Mark, or Aedomir, which ever floats your boat. :wink: I'm sure you will have a great time here, ...

Hi! :lol: We are all crazy! I'm Mark, and I'll be happy to answer any questions you have. It's really fun being addicted to YWS, have a great time and ...

I am boring. :-(

jam

I agree, I have never been so deperate to change my name. lol.

French

I believe that if the baby will only be born into a world of hatred and poverty, I say have an abortion. It would only put a lot of lives ...

El Wierdo