Aedomir

Hiya! I haven't read this... I turned my gaze to her; her pale body I would change the first 'her' to a 'Corrie'. She was staring at space with wide ...

Hehe! I loved that effect with pastels, I am terrible with them. :wink: Nice drawing! Love the background, the effects, etc. My only problem is the skin tone on the ...

Hiya! Mind if I take a look? Thought not... I loved the opening paragraph, very well written, and an excellent catch. gift, to much 'too', homophone :wink: Ignorant of their ...

Hi! Let's see... Waking in a mound of sheets and blankets Danni let out a sigh. Removing the blanket So a mound of one blanket? The first sentence leads me ...

As much as I love he way you portrayed everything here, it feels more so... dramatic writing, mostly because of the lack of fluidity within the lines. I would consider ...

Hiya! Just a few suggestions: along my arms yet cannot picture I reckon an 'I' should go after 'yet'. It doesn't make sense as it stands. I loed that poem... ...

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OK this is getting VERY off-topic and confusing...

We will harm the bacteria by killing it.

The world is overpopulated anyway.

In which case do not talk about things you do not know of. Bacteria doesn'#t stop growing unless you kill it.

Contradictions between the gospels mean nothing, as they are the same story told by different people, and mistakes could easily be made. Do you realize what you just said? You ...

I love that picture! You took that? I think it is beautiful! Not much to say, sorry! Love it! ~Mark~

Ah yes! Further example. I do not hate the bible, but people who use it as a weapon/shield I have no time for.

So, by your standards, building a house is no different from building a park bench in the beginning stages? No. The egg cell is multiplying to form a child, while ...