Aedomir

*sigh* You are a teenager. Not to mention, this is a debate not a conversation.

Yes, bad music. Since when were all rappers multi-millionaires? Only the extremely successful ones are, and that doesn't mean they've all had an easy life. Yes, about 2 have been ...

‘Run ! Why the space? ‘Shit!’ Mark cursed, The dialogue is unnecessary, just say that he cursed (Hehe, Mark's my name!) come on’ comma after 'on' :wink: for the sake ...

Firstly, grammar. That entire first stanza is one sentence, and the second doesn't even have a full stop. Also, it only needs a capital letter if it is at the ...

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Oh yes, I know. That's when abortions come in... I don't believe in teenagers having sex willy-nilly but I think adults can.

Why should your parents need to approve of it?

I was having a look and I noticed Adnamarine is in there four times.

Hey guys! This is just a recently written extract from part of my novel. I just wondered what you thought of it. It won't make sense even if you have ...

I'd laugh if were admins all along.

And if they did drop out of schools, what kind of a role-model is that?

This is for NaNoWriMo XxxDo. You have to write 50,000 words in one month (November). Well done with yours though!

I really enjoyed that! I loved all the negatives you used, but it bothers me how you used 'dead/death' so much along with 'bloody' and 'kill'. The theme was nice ...

Well Jack, you are really good at poems. Do you do many? Wasteland I like the capital letter here. Generally, I liked number one. Great imagery and I enjoyed all ...

Hehe! You know, as random as this is, I will actually give a proper crit. Mathas stops walking. He has seen something Change in tense, ther a few more too. ...