Aedomir

Great piece, you captured the intense moments of Halo brilliantly. I would say that the battle scen was slightly short, which is what tends to happen when you write such ...

Thanks everyone! Hi! Thanks for the review bear, really encouraging thoughts.

Thank you so very much! When you said about dying, isn't that when you dye something a colour? I don't know but thankyou for the wonderful review! No one has ...

That was a very good piece. It certainly showed your skills in dialogue, and inserting a good bit of humour in there. I thought it was catchy, interesting and makes ...

Hi Lindsay! I love my fantasy pieces. I had a go at politics once but then I just felt ill... Not to mention the excriciating boredom that it entailed! I ...

Author's Note I posted this back in January, but please take this and up to around #7 as a pinch of salt, I have improved leagues since then! Thank you. ...

This is a very moving piece, strange really. I just find present tense very catchy (although I would never use it!). You have brilliant talent and I can't find enough ...

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Personally, I am not a huge fan of present first person, but I can see the pluses (that right?). Anyway, I think your style is quite appleaing, but I am ...

Hi, I'm Mark and I live in Birmingham in England. I have nejoyed writing stories for a long time, but have only begun to take it seriously recently. I have ...