Aedomir

I don't realy know what to say here, I've had some great advice, and very clearly to sides to my style. OK, some of you hate it. Many of you ...

Why in the world are goblins Arabs!? erm... wtf? Who said anything about Arabs? Please Reply lol

Chapter One Part III “Aedomir, Aedomir! Wake up!” Aedomir’s eyes opened partway, and his vision burst into action. Above him shimmered a battle-worn face, whose hoarse lips trembled and panted ...

You are all so kind!! Thank you everyone!! Just a couple of things, sir wozzel, sombrely is the uk spelling, somberly is the american. The Guardian isn't Aedomir's title (it ...

Hi, I'm Mark. Yep, rap is terrible, they missed off the 'c' when the made up the name lol

OO, well done so far, this could be a very good piece. I like your tense and pace, they fit together very well, and as far as writing is going, ...

Hi! I thought I'd return the favour: When I read this, I was stunnned by how good a writer you are!!! Serioulsy, you would give thousands of proffesional writrs a ...

Hi. I like where you're going with this, but I just have a couple of thoughts. #1 After the first few paragraphs, there is not a lot of narrative. This ...

Ok, let's go! “I am not human.” Her words rang in his ears. “I am not alien.” He still stood at the doorway, the door he had slammed in her ...

Sorry to say this but it MUST be typed, one way or another. Ignore your parents, why would they care if you're writing a novel? Wouldn't they be happy? Oh, ...

Hey everyone! I'm Valerie, but please call me Val! Just joined this site! It seems cool! I need friends and such. So yeah. Talk to me! nice poem lol hellooooooooooooo

How the hell would you do second? You are walking down the road and you see a shop... wtf??

How the goodness do you pronounce Aλλαγή? Really good so far Moderator: Please do not curse! Thanks.

Thanks a lot for the review, and for the donation! The first one was supposed to be The Immortals but I pressed submit before I noticed it. Oh well, thanks ...

Hi, nice to meet you. Just a grammar issue that I picked up on: I think [s]there are[/s] a few customers in the back didn’t hear you.” I thought that ...