Aedomir

Hi guys! Thanks for the reviews. I know that wasn't brilliant... Shall I be honest? OK. Well, I wrote that in like October... That was when I was coming up ...

That's clever, I didn't think of that. Sorry, I didn't realise I was using offensive language. I just thought I would make a catchy title... Now I feel like an ...

OK, lets see what crap I can come up with... The little old lady kissed a pig on the mane and travelled to jupiter before sunbathing in bear-closet III with ...

OK, heres the situation. I am writing a novel called The Immortals as a few of you are familiar with. My evil orc-like-golbin-like people are Kalbarcs. I HATE that name!!! ...

Hi, I've had a read through, and nothing major hit me really. I thought your description of the tower was a bit difficult to understand - it doesn't flow very ...

:arrow: Author's Note Hi, This might not turn out to be your favourite part, I think it's a bit boring to be honest, but I threw the idea together in ...

thanks for all the critcs everyone

thanks for the crits every1! yet again great reviews. does the last sentence mean he is dead? or seomthing else... find out this week...

Chapter One Part IV He broke off at the wood’s border. Carefully, he pushed the bushes aside and stepped in. Nothing could be seen through the pitch black atmosphere… Just ...

Ye sure no prob jabber. Thanks for the review, I take it your the punctuation person!

Ye, sorry, I didn;t mean it like that. It was kind of you to write that long critique, thanks.

lol, I like short, to the point stories. I can;t really talk about grammar, it seems fine to me. I wonder why he wants the chocolate... let's go find out! ...

Ye sure I'll have a look--promise!

lol thanks i have no idea how i get so many reviews! bigbadbear was the first to read #1 and he's become quite a good mate on the site! im ...

Wow first fan! I've been working on this story for over a year but you should have seen some of the crap I was coming up with to begin with, ...