Aedomir

You've won many writing awards? Cool! I'm off to read your submitions now! See you around the stie, Im new I think I'll post an about the author thing...

wow i thought that was really good, cute and friendly. Im not really a romance guy, but I thought this was great!

I don't get the joke for scene 1!! Can you explain it to me please, then I'll critique it!! from what I read I thought it was funny lol

I have no idea whether this was intentional but look at this charcters: Dayton - Day Daun - Dawn Twila - Twilight Luna - Moon If that wasn't on pruprose ...

Well done! I thought that was a very original piece with no eyecathcing grammatical errors. There were a few sentence structure problems, but nothing that I thought made it any ...

I can't really ofer you much train of thought for grammar or sentence structure, just to think carefully about what your characters say a bit more. Take LotR for example: ...

[s]I would genuinely say that this is one of my stories on the site so far. I really enjoyed reading it, mostly because this is the type of book I ...

lol I have no idea how I got so many hits, I think most people read my stories and then read the rest... I dont really know lol. Ye I ...

Hi! I like where this is going with this, and it hs potntial but I am still unsure of the plot (what you want?). Anyway, I really liked it, just ...

Thank you very much Jabber! This has been a very mixed chapter, two for and two against. Much of my writing is very opinion based, but thanks are crtainly in ...

Thanks BBB. and jezza ye it makes sense i suppse but i think i will change it neway, seems a bit weird lol

Thanks jabber! I hate to think how long that must have taken! They wer all very notable suggestions though, many which I should have seen before. Thanks again! Oh and ...

Tears. A very original topic, and didn't know non-ficiotn could be so interesting! A never knew so much could be put about tears either, could job there and especially with ...

lol people do usually write in diaries evryday but I would make sure that everything i the diaries you choose to add are relevant to the stroline...

That would be a good start to a novel, it was funny how she started to kill that guy without knowing it was wrong. The lack of narrative however makes ...