Aedomir

Hi guys! This is a biggee! If you have followed my novel, you will know I have posted for some time, that is because I have done about 3000 words ...

Thanks very much! Nice to meet you, I'm Mark. Have you posted anything? I'll have a loom I think.

Wow BBB! When I read this, I was amazed at how well you managed to capture my attention! Usually, online I just can't sit reading from my computer screen, but ...

I really liked your use of description, excellent grammar and the dialogue. Yu prsented us with a very intersting an fun story read, well done! I liked the use of ...

I actually quite likes that. Not fantastic, but really like the way you get by with such little description, and pull it off so brilliantly. I really like the character ...

Lol! Very good. You know that they all forgot the c on the front of (c)rappers. lol. Interesting twist on the 3 lil pigs. You know you could make a ...

8/10 random but cool lol

I used to be part of WRITERS.NET. It was terrible but someone suggested I find a young writers place, so here I am!

Try reriting about 10 a week, you will have it done in less than four months!

9/10 looks pretty cool but i dont like the red lol bty yes I look like a prat lol

I really like this, it has huge potential. You are a very good writer clearly, and not many grammar issues stand out to me. I think you are very telented ...

Intriguing story! The way that you managed to type the letter 'i' so incredibly! Please put it up again, so I may read and review it. I don't know why ...

Granted but you learn everything and your head blows up *cackles hysterically* I wish my novel became really famous

Sounds cool, like a sci-fi film? I'd pick it up and have a look at the blurb. Book 1 The Immortals Book 2 Spawn Book 3 As Time Ends

Hello! Nice to meet you... civilians send them hurtling send ing barrage of bullets you've already used bullets, although tis a cool phrase... Was it fear, excitement, lust for blood. ...