Aedomir

I have no idea why, but or some reason a amd a cartoon called MilkMan: Do you like him? I got bored but hes te best animation ive made in ...

I really like the dragon! You're very good a drawing!

That picture is beautiful! Its like a fantasy world. I can just see my hero walking through it, gazing back over the last few days. I love it, georgeous!

English government didn't have Prime Ministers until the 1950s and Anyway, here is chapter two! I hope that you like it! It's not nearly as boring as chapter one. Don't ...

Yup, this has definatley been summed up... mostly Elegant, majestic, exciting, emotive... I just love your style, its the type all great writers aspire to be like. Of course, this ...

Let it bleed... sounds like the beatles... Let it Be. Lol, anyhow... Many bad authors believe that a good novel is just a million adjectives per sentence. No. I t ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

this is unaturally oraganised lol! :-D let me know when we hold an audience with advisor pen. maybe could prehaps get the message late and come in at the last ...

Aedomir's strides speeded up. His heart pounded heavily against his chest and his blood raced through his veins. The blur of goblins closed in, their foul stenches meeting Aedomir head ...

(ye, everyone dies! woo! :-D if you want to write 1st person, thats fine, just put it on italics and say who you are talking about just beforehand.)

Only one applied to me... :? what's wrong with trilogies!

Having said that, if your guy splits off from the rest of the group, you will cotnrol him. That sort of thing.

Ye, I wanted active control really, you say what the guy is doing and work from that, but ye, just 3rd person from ur POV will be fine, its just ...

(let's start!) Aedomir sat on the log, admiring the roaring flames as they leapt high into the night sky. He could hear the sound of footsteps closing in, and heavy ...

thats clever! I think we'll do just that: red for evil team blue for allied team green for when they meet. And can we not have a storybook, where you ...