Aedomir

Hi there! Photography? That's great! I'm sure you already know we have an art and photography forum, so post them and we will take a look! PM me if you ...

cool names! 'Flora, Fauna and Felicia' :-D everything, apart from Flight class OK, i, as a reader, don't know what flight class is. You do, but I don't. Try a ...

There really isn't a lot to say. I can't see any obvious grammar issues :-D well done! I liked your plot, and the suspense was great! How do you do ...

Wow! Cool maps! I need to make my own...

I really like the last one! Wow, that's really good

I disliked the first sentence: 'I was in the darkness again.' It just sounds a bit flat and boring for a first line. How about 'Darkness enveloped me once more' ...

Hi there! Su smiled faintly at the memory, though the memory was merely a flicker on the screen of her mind. Repetition of 'memory' wrecks the feel. Try rewriting this ...

banned for complaiing against the government in your country

banned for arguing with why i banned you

Banned for calling TV mad in your sig

Hey! I haven't time for along crit, but here goes: Imagine this. Me, aged twenty four, ten years from now. I can't, because I dont't know you. That was the ...

Hello! Nice to meet you! I'm Mark, I joined a few weeks back. I'm sure you will find this place really encouraging. Even if you don't write, you can give ...

Ye, I agree with everyone esle. Funny original, interesting, exciting! Nice and lighthearted after the crappy day I've been having. You've just made me happy! Keep writing! ~D'Aedomir~

Storyline Barry Halley has just been bitten by a radioactive cow. He turned into... MILKMAN! Soon after, he discovered that his archenemy, Postman, is gathering an army to rival Milkman. ...

I find inspiration in the wierdest places. I just a chicken curry for dinner. I looked down and saw that the chicken in the middle was surrounded by rice... Reminded ...