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Re: The Whining Arrow
(oo i'm likin it!) Aedomir A battle horn raged from the distant forest. Aedomir span round to meet a host of cold eyes glaring back at him in apprehension. "Everybody! ...
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Re: Fragile Bones. (Has been shattered)
hiya! lets have a look what we have here :-): 'rip the stone floor open' Do you rip stone? break, scratch? 'front of hers, his blood red eyes meeting hers.' ...
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Re: Sucked into YWS
Aedomir "Ow!" Aedomir landed onto the post with a 'thud'. He looked around and saw the words 'The Immortals' inprinted at his feet. "For god's sake! I haven't taken LSD ...
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Re: The Life and Times of Miss Aurora Beaumont (and friends)
lol thast clever I didn;t know that. I haven't seen sleeping beauty. Good ideas though! :-D
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Re: The Horizon and Beyond
~Aedomir~ Aedomir scowled at Pens as he scurried out of the room, tail between his legs. Pathetic. Can't even face the people who could be saving his carreer. "I'll have ...
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Re: Data Squad
Digimon? Sure OK! If it works for you, why not give it a go?! I might join, but I don't know the first thing about it! :-D ~D'Aedomir~
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Re: I Don't Want To
Uou lost me, but that's not to say I didn't like it. It was very intriguing. I don’t want to hate her, I don’t even love her…. I don’t like ...
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Re: The Whining Arrow
Aeodmir Aedomir took a deep breath, and rose his sword for another clash, but it never came. He opened his eyes partway and shot glances around him. Combat had fallen. ...
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Re: Serendipity
I lvoed the structure of this poem, its really great! I enjoyed this, and I think it was short, snappy, to the point and no faffing about! I liked the ...
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Re: Seven Deadly Sins #2 [Vanity]
Yay! :-D Nah, you can't mimick poetry! Don't be so modest! You're great!
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Re: Don’t Look At My State Of Mind
Wow! 'I try so fucking hard sometimes That I forget that I’m alive.' Strangley fantastic! Catching and yet o fully of imagery, whcih is saying something really! I really loved ...
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Re: At least call me, mon amour
Like everyone else here, I loved this. The last stanza really did it for me. Such a pwerful ending, summing it all up and giving a total seal. It was ...
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Re: A fish
Wow that's actually reall good. I didn't know that was the fish at first, its a very weird angle, but I don't dislike it!I think it looks really cool, good ...
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Re: Snow White- After the Poison Apple
Hello there! :-) I'm Mark nice to meet you! This is very good, I thought it was really funny. Very intersting take on a fairy tale! You really modernised it ...
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Re: Hello!
lol edward scissorhands? if you like :-D that's a cool film. I;m sure you don't have many question fi you've been on before. You do poetry? cool, what genres? I ...
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