Aedomir

Aedomir "Ya!" Aedomir swipe his sword round, blindly sweeping a goblin head clean off. He couldn't see anymore, just a line of them hurrying away. He sheathed hsi sword and ...

he frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men grasped

This sounds like a good read, let me know when you publish it! :-D Keep writing! ~D'Aedomir~

I've read the first 5, and half of 6. I feel I have grown out of them now, but ye, Horowitz (?) is a brilliant children's writer. He's really good ...

I've never read that, but as soon as I finish the Eagle's Conquest and LotR TTT its how to kill a mocking birf for me! Be it the shut-in Boo ...

lol, half the people who hate eragon are british. I guess we just hate those who copy our Tolkien's (*sign of trinity*) work. OK, so Tolkien masy have is flaws ...

I HATE Paolini. He's vain, thinks he is better than Tolkien and a complet copier of him. I really hate him. I bought Eragon, read the first chapter and put ...

I liek the idea and the shape, but I think it looks to flat and boring. The colours make it a bit tacky, I think you could work on that. ...

How could you realise yo are gay at 13? Eveybody thinks they are gay at 13! :-D

~Aedomir~ "Puncy upper class..." Aedomir snorted. Luckily, he hadn't unpacked. He had just as much cause as to ride of into the wilderness, back to home . "I'm staying," he ...

Heya! Lets have a look shall we? 'her eyelids rise, and this time, she spots me' Don't take my word on this, but do you think 'but' would work better ...

Ye, that was VERY confusing, but I don't dislike it. I'm not really a poem guy, but I liked this. Not much to say really! Keep Writing! ~D'Aedomir~ :-D

I don't dislike it, it jsut feels as though a million words are cramped together, adn that you used a theasrus for every other word lol! :-D Make sure you ...

You know, when I read this, I jstu tell you are a poet. It has that... you know, present tense, wonderful imagery, that sort of thing. I really don't know ...

Hiya! Like everyone else, I would like to say... Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you will find this place very helpful, just make sure to always read the rules before ...