Aedomir

Everything that you write really, I could just here you saying. It was very realistic, so well done on that! I would agree with others though, when I say it ...

I went to but I really hated it, it was boring, so I looked for a yound writers place and here I am!

Heya there! I'm Mark, I have no idea why I called my name Aedomir lol 'I've been writing ever since I was really small and now I have started a ...

Hiya there! 'I groaned and turned my head, but that seemed to be the only thing that obeyed me. My eyes wouldn’t even open, I felt so weighed down. There ...

Glad I could be of help! PM me if you need further crits or whatever.

Hello! I think what should happen is a surprise attack on the vanguard. When we are moving out, some assassins try to kill us all. The pace is alright for ...

Heya there clock! First off, did you make that poem? If he did, its great! And if you didn't, its still pretty good anyway :-D 'Inside room HE-3 there was ...

~Aedomir~ Aedomir felt completely exhausted. Only now, Lying down against his horse did he realise jsut how tired he was. There were several others there now. Sure this must be ...

(lol! As soon as I went to bed the plot goes mental! I'll read this is a sec lol)

'I tried to read Eragon, but it was SO BORING. Okay, the only thing I am reall impressed by is that he actually had the determination to write that fat ...

Lol! You make some very strange and wonderful things! I love all tree of those pcis, they're raelly great! I love them! The second is my absolute favourite, then the ...

Wow Wozzell! The rhyming was realy good! You should be a poet my man! The imagery was stop on and I coudn't sense any flaw with it at all, well ...

Ye, it is opinion but I completly agree with you. He went around schools, mostly primary's and first schools, children who knew no better than to believe him. The secondaries ...

Hey! Nice to meet you and welcome to the forums! Like Suzanne, I don't want to repeat what everyone else has said, just make sure that you read the rules ...

Aedomir Aedomir sat by the lpeaing flames, pondering. Where had Bella and Thyme got to? He looked around, and stood up to pursue them. Then he heard a rustle in ...