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Ye, I admit it looks pretty ok, if you haven't read the blurb lol. As soon as you rad page 1, it gets boring. I might read it one day, ...

Thanks! That's really grat of you to say. I used to just mimick other authors which I believed were talented, but I think I am past that now. :-D Keep ...

Hiya! Part 3 already? 'My sister… Emma, she whom disappeared two years ago has been found' I could be wrong, but that in bold I think is a bit unnecessary. ...

Hiya! I agree with others here about calling someone and not knowing why. Its an easy way around a weak storyline. Make this a bit stronger, give her a reason ...

Wow that's really good 3B! Time to crit chapter 4: 'It seemed like they had all frozen until Auntie Clair glanced at Uncle Steven' I know what you mean it ...

Woo 3B! i'll catch up on stoweaway now The Immortals #8, my favourite part:

parles-tu en Francais? Je suis anglais et je parle francais quand je suis... ennyeux

Can I just say your svatar really reaks me out

lol if you say so :-D

Ye I think we should all do that really, or not exactly but have something special which we all have, and comes useful within the story later on perhaps?

This was very confusing, and it all seems a little poetic. I mean, I liekd it, but don't you think perhaps it may seem too intense for a story, as ...

I might read that, sounds interesting. That Mr Beah sounds like a right prat lol :-D

Just keep at it! ou will et it soon enough! :-D I agree with Suzanne, short term paain for long term gain right?

This is really random but strangely pretty cool! Juat make granpa a bit mroe... grandpa. White hair, beard, I don't know! This is actually a bit spooky lol :-D Keep ...

Hiya! I really liked it, its mysterious, strange and certainly not too short. It adds a nice bit of suspense for the first few lines, and I can't see anything ...