Aedomir

Is this the one which you said was about 50k of words? I'll read this in a it when I get time, and edit this post with a review but ...

(Have you noticed how like almost all stroybooks are fantasy lol!)

Whats a manga? Shes pretty cool actually, I like the far right one. Pretty good drawings!

*horrified* They are alright, but he use a load of puncy words to hide his no-talent and poor sentence structures. Its a matter of opinion really, I just find that ...

I really liked them, especially the last one. The others didn't really do much for me, and the top one was a bit distracting with the shadow.

This looks really cool! I might join it soon, I jsut came to see what this is like.

Its really nice, just seems a bit... dull. give it some cool fiery colours. I like the shape and the idea, you are a great drawer!

I am not a fan of books or letters that supposedly make you a better writer, thyey just dont work. You can write or you cant, and you leanr fom ...

lol ye freaky :-D

Wow! That's really good! I especially liked the firts entry, I didn't feel as though I was being overloded with info (but be careful not to do that bty!). Just ...

english isn't first language *checks country* oh sweden! :-D

lol ye that happens to me... Hve you ever had that weird moment when you're thinking about something and someone on TV says it? lol

I like LotR because the plot develops throguout the very long book. In Eragon, its jsut overly-worded to make it look more fantasy-like... honestly, its pathetic.

Aedomir Aedomir sat on a ledge nearby, mumbling in solitude for several minutes, as the events around him unfolded. It not be long for the enemy to regroup and attack. ...

Hi Kook! Welcome to YWS there! I am not very good with poetry, but will share with my thoughts. I like the structure and the idea behind it, but I ...