Aedomir

Heya! Welcome to YWS! Feel free to PM me if you have any questions. Just be careful not to get addicted to this place like me, it becomes your best ...

Heya there! I don't think I've seen you about, lets have a look shall we? Oh god, why dose my 'Does', typo “Rhhhaaaaaahoo” At first I thought that there was ...

Heya! Sorry it took a while to get to, I've been really stuck down with homework... I was very unsure where you were going with this at first, but now ...

Hey there Kevyn! I'll see you about! I won't repeawt what others have said here... Welcome and :-D

I really liked this, it has a great start... and ending, in fact all 7 lines were good! :-D I am unsure about the plot, because I don't know what ...

With my parents, they don't know I write, because I don't feel I have achieved enough to show people yet. My mum wants me to be a lawyerr but I ...

lol! Thanks, I will get to chasing rainbows I really promise! Don't worry. Aedomir is the main character lol, I need to make him a bit more likeable :-D

('we need every able bodied fighter' oo LotR quote lol, random bears...)

Chapter Four: A Distant Yonder

The poetic line is wonderful when you adapt for a story to set the scene. Look I what I changed something to say: The waves of fog embraced under the ...

I use the computer mainly, one way or another it has to go on there. If however, I am lying in bed, not tired but can't be bothered to read, ...

Heya BBB! Don't you just hate writer's block? I've had one for about a week, I think I got rid of it now lol :-D Right, on to the crit! ...

Sorry, I tried to drag us back on topic several times... I know that it's a publicity thing. But it's still pretty fun to bash... Although, considering that I do ...

Aedomir Aedomir shook his head at Robin, then darted towards the wooden paliasade (?) stairs. A horn bellowed through the misty night, and yet stil;l he had no sleep. Another ...

Look at this: Its kind of funny, yet strangely poetic... The faking boy to the crap is gone, Among the wondrous ways of men and time From the forests and ...