Aedomir

Hey! Mind if I take a look...? I thought not: I found that this just wasn't dramatic enough. By all means, repetition can be great, but not in this amount. ...

Hey, welcome to the site! My stubborn lover, my mistress at heart she coxes me on when others would depart. I would put a comma after 'heart' and remove the ...

Hello! I am really sorry, but this is just too much. I mean, this is 10,000 words - I don't think anyone will be able to sit through this. I ...

Hey! I must say, I found that very entertaining. The way you managed to poor in so much cliché stuff, and still keep me interesting was great. The last stanza ...

Oh I love it! The colours are really interesting, and I like it because it isn't over the top, yet nice haze! Great image, be sure to let Nate know ...

Wow these are really great! 1) It is hard enough to see the butterfly as it is. Try to contrast the background or blur it some more, crop it in ...

Good idea TN.

It was annoying me, but I am beginning to like it :-) -Mark

Can someone please explain to me why the candidates feel the need to bring up the idea of presidential elections a year before? Anyhow, irration aside, I feel Clinton is ...

I hate the idea of getting money based on exam levels. It just greaters the divide doesn't it? It's like the American government can't be bothered with the descending schools. ...

*singer, how about you are inflitrating the weapons depot in Russia - finding out about their new 'nuke'. Use your imagination :wink:*

To be honest, yes it is the teachers, but also, the students. I go to a Grammar School, and I actually wanted to go to a Comprehensive to be with ...

Michael Dunn Michael began considering. This would be bigger than he anticipated. He grunted. "Oh," he said. "Alright then... well come on then. The Prime Minister is in danger." *gah, ...

Michael Dunn Michael sighed. He had heard stuff like this so many times he tended to just do the job. Something told him this one wouldn't be so easy. "Right, ...

*Not, it's fine. :-)* Michael Dunn His jaw fell as he watched the Premier die, and people scream as the camera darkened. "Woah..." someone said. Michael turned, half in trance, ...