Aedomir

Again, the tone and the rhythm was great, its just that there wasn't a lot there if you get my meaning. Its a bit flat. The emotive language wasn't there ...

lol, its just that I can't go out anyway because of all the homework I've been lumbered with. I only got one pic of paolini anyway!

What a brilliant adaptation! This is really good, and I enjoyed it tremendously. I haven't seen The little mermaid so I can't compare really, but the way 'Daddy's girl' is ...

lol 3B, no problem I enjoyed field trip it was great! Stella, I'll get to it ASAP. Hang on, why don't I have a life at the moment? I'm just ...

Second, this is way too short to be a story. This is a carry on. Hiya! I like this, but I am still unsure where this is going, I hope ...

? You posted this on the website to get feedback and advice. If you are not willing to learn, then prhaps you should take your arrogance away. Don't be so ...

Pippo! Don't quit, honestly, just because we ave a few questions is no reason to have a go at us!

Thanks Jabber! I'm so unsure about the horse, its too LotR. Unintenional by the way! Why did Tolkien have to steal all the good ideas lol “You will learn, [period ...

Who wants a crit? OK, so this is a complete copy of BBB's topic, but if you would like a crit, just post it here with a link and I ...

Calm down, we're trying to help you!

Thnaks very much! Aedomir is actually quite clever, he's just very confused because, well, we woke up 1000 years later than when he last remebered. And the horse thing, don't ...

I don't think they're called hijackers in cars. They are called carjackers :-). Hijackers are for aeroplanes lol. 'What were the seats now above me?' ' WHY were seats now ...

Heya! I've read the first one, and I really liked it, but when he stood up with the gun, wouldn't bus have lost control? Bah. OK: “I—I don’t have a ...

So when is the Jan issue going to be ready?

Heya! Sorry it took a while, I've been so pressed down with homework: I see you've edited it based on other's suggestions, so ther's really nothing I can see from ...