Aedomir

Cool idea I say! Smoking is a filthy habit, with absolutley zero reasons to do it.

Heya there! Please could you put a sace bertween paragraphs please, this is really hard to read!

Everyone, I see it has been downloaded 20 times or so, if you have read it, please give me your opinion!

Aedomir "Archers! Fire!" A cluster of arrows shot from the wall and crashed down, leaving several goblins strewn dead over the floor. "Back volley! Now!" Several more guards fired arrows ...

I got the book the other day, I'm chapter four. The film looks wuite good, scary and that. It doesn;t follow the book very well though:-D

I am not American, so perhap it is not my right to criticise, but in the UK, it is illegal to possess a gun, unless you have a very good ...

Next time, please put page numbers in to make it less confusing lol :-D This bugged me: 'She was holding a colorful book in her hand that said, “The Badger ...

Wow! I honestly loved that thoroughly! My favourite line: 'In a French countryside torn apart, The mud, the trench, the broken heart.' The punctuation makes it flow so brilliantly, and ...

I would say it was immoral. In the long term, the idea of a relationship is for love and commitment, how can that happen with two people?

Wow snoink! When I read this, I was think this is FREAKing awesome! The way you write everything made it flow so well! When will the next part come along? ...

I really liked this, you have real talent. I think your sentences are very well structured, it's jsut the occasional repetition of grammar issues. Jabber got all those. Nothing to ...

Cpt. Smurf, I entirely agree. Put it this way, after death, lets assume there is nothing. You don't know that you ever existed, you don't know that you ever killed ...

Cool quotes from Bartemius, but who are the others? :-D

Hey BBB! I've already crit this piece before, so I won't again. This is really good, just something to be careful of: 1800s England, They wouldn't have had six story ...

I will get to it ASAP, probs the morning.