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Hi BBB! Nice to see some more work from you (I must read 'I think I'm in Love') It's intersting how you managed to write a story fom a dream, ...

Hey! Nice to see a bit more descriptive fantasy (I love descriptive scenes!). The first paragraph I thought was really well presented. In fact I also loved it in the ...

Actually, I think Huntsville sounds pretty cool. Its a bit sinister, creepy, strange and all that. It appeals to me, but likes others have said you can always jsut have ...

I think that is a very good idea. Very few authors understand about PoV.

(green is when they interact but whatever!)

lol :-D Ye, I might carry on, but this is sort of a spoof of an animation I made called, yes, you guessed it, Milkman.

Ah, you said about this in your welome message. I said I'd help, so here I am! I voted for other, because they all seem a bit childish and cliche. ...

A lot of the time, we see 'true love' when we love our partner. Of course, there always will be another person, but then people cannot move on and believe ...

That sounds great! Just before ya do, be careful to check the rules, and post two reviews before you submit yours. When I get an idea of what this place ...

What's the cliche bit? I was purposley taking the mick out of Batman and that :-D

You're working on a novel? What do ya want? A medal? lol just kidding. I'm writing a novel too, what's yours about? What's it called? When will you post some ...

Heya! '“Yes’m,”' I don't understand that, just my lack of social skills I expect :-D Anyway, I really like this story. It's great. Mature, senisible, thought out, original, it's just ...

lol, nah no one really died in the postal strike, it was jut me taking the mick :-D

OK, I wrote this to get out of Writer's Block. It's the most random thing I've made written, but hey! :-D I will be introsucing more characters and I know ...

Talk about incest! Eww... that's freaky, I should read the papares more often :? Just imagine that. Its a cool idea for a novel, it reminds me of star wars!