Aedomir

Thanks!

(Just a question, can we get out of our cages? I'm a bit lost sorry!)

Heya there! I hate asking or reviews... But in my portfolio there's a really random sotry called 'Milkman'... appreciated review please!

Anyways. Do you think I should continue this? It is Part One, after all. (Blizzard is a character in my larger novel - this is just a novella that I've ...

Lol, why? I'm a bit thick.

This was brill, honestly. A bit of rhyming would have been nice, to my opinion, but I;m not sure to be fair, because I know sod-all about poetry and the ...

That was really good! I might not be an expert on poetry, but this was really grat. It flowed very well, and the rhyming was super. The stanzas are set ...

I like both the topic, and the grat way that you portrayed it. Its really grat, and gets the points across. Not much to say really!

First submission? Don't worry, we're nice here! :-D 'Birds flew out of the trees unexpectedly.' If you want to make it sound strange, I am not convinced this is the ...

Heya! I liked the first line of chapter two, it was descitpive and nicely done, but far frmo OTT. This really good, and I'm sorry but I can't do grammar. ...

I know of them :-D I'll research into them and might buy one, depends if I think its really me .

I'm sorry, but its jsut too hard to read. The colour and no space between paragrahps hurts my ese, please alter it!

Oh thanks Nate. In that case, I'm a democrat :-D Obama, as I said before, is my favourite. Also, he seems as thought he would have stronger relations with other ...

That's a great idea. The thought of concepts, and the facts. Really, I would say our emotions guide us and we follow what others do. If you get what I ...

Hiya! We reach at last... the grat battle of our time... Sorry, ignore me... Anyhow, this is no dispapointment. It's great how you managed to pull this out of your ...