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Re: Hey people
Welcome welcome welcome! I'm Mark, but yo can call me Aedomir or Mark whichever floats you boat! New around? Don't worry, we are all friendly, and just PM anyone if ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Milkman!
Thanks for the review everyone, really appreciated. I doubt I will carry on, but you never know!
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Reborn
Hiya! Like others have said, go back and fix that grammar! 'but for the remaining hours of the night, that’s when they come out' ^ that doesn't make sense, replace ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: "My Book" (Chapter 1)
Heya! When I "woke up", I knew that I was dead, as contradictory as that may seem. Yep, I have to admit, that is one of the most ironic things ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Communism, for better or for worse?
When we look at communisn, what do we see. Is communism right or wrong? Does it benefit the government? Is it completley wrong? Would the economy go into meltdown? There ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (2nd Version): Prologue Part 1
Heya! I read this in bed a couple of ngihts ago, sorry for the wait but here goes: who's WHOSE who's is a contraction for 'who is' the irony made ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Sword and Storm
I think I'll give it a go! Why not?! OK, here's mine: name- Aedomir age- 39 gender- Male race- human personality- friendly, warm and happy. Outgoing, strong, honest, fun to ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Gettin a writer's name
MS reminds me of the acronym for manuscript (MS). It also kindda looks like Ms. Crawford, which probably isn't what you intended. Wink Haha! :lol: Good point, I think I ...
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Look, a Newbie! Kill it!
Heya! all ready tut tut for a grammar nut...! Nice to meet you, I'm Mark, or Aedomir, whichever floats your boat...
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Adam and Elle.
Heya! Right, well I am quite mixed up about this. I think the description and the imagery was beautiful, but the characters lacked... emotion. At least, that's what I thought. ...
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Any1 ever heard of The Edge Cornicles
Haha! Am I just typing to make sure this topic stays up? Yes! I think I am!
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze [2]
Aedomir shot his head up. He was lying next to a great fire, the leaping flames bursting into the night sky. But something was amis. He could feel it. He ...
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Help! Need Name Suggestions
I would say whatever country you are most familar with. If you're British, try there etc.
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Gettin a writer's name
lol ms word oh ye... how about M.A.CRAWFORD? or M.S.A.CRAWFORD
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (2nd Version): Prologue Part 1
Heya! I've printed it off, I'll get the feedback to you ASAP!
Feb 20, 2008
