Aedomir

Hiya! Mind if I take a look...? I liked the meaningful background, and the idea that you seem to know where you're going, but yes, as with others I would ...

Do you want to keep yourself occupied?

I really like the rhythm, the puncuation and the format, but ther's no... emotion. I know you can portray 'thunuder' in many different ways, but I just can't feel the ...

I think its November, because of: NOVE mber. Just misses an 'l' for novel. If it were in the summer holidays...

I live in hope lol...

lol, ye maybe. I was balancing it with school and coursework and homework... I think I had better shut up before I punch the screen :-D

I was joking lol :-d

Gah! She beat me... just. As soon as I went to bed... I swear she never sleeps! :? I'm so angry! Oh well, I'll try harder next time lol

Nice to meet you! I can speak a bit of French... I think :-). See you about!

I didn't do it last year, I had never even heard of it. Yes, *gasp* I know... I fear I won't be able to do it this either, with school ...

Hiya! Nice to see yet another story by you! Have you ever listened to your heart thump against your chest at night, when no one is around to hear it? ...

I hate it when it is stereoctypical for a woman to be in the kitchen, with men doing the jobs around the house and watching football. That's very judgemental. Put ...

A hose is a hose... but this is so much more! :lol: A love the tree too, very artistic

~AEDOMIR~ They climbed onto the horse, Aedomir up front holding the reins. "Ya!" The horse shot off, nearly knocking Finn from the saddle. "This should be fun!" he shouted. "No ...

You don't have to do that! That's nice of you! Actually, what you might want to do is rea the one n the advanced crit forum, then add #8 #9 ...