Aedomir

Wow great ideas! Nice names for the illnesses :-D This is me! I like to mix them up, and see hwat happens.

So what's happening? What journal?

Agreed. Didn't they lose a laptop, someone had on the backseat of their car? The DNA database I think is fair, because it doesn't restrict and this is hardly discrimination. ...

Keep them coming people!

I'm currently appalled by the discrimination against young people in Britain. This whole 'teen siren' thing that was going to be introduced on the streets made me feel sick. (The ...

Aedomir: The punishment would be the person is dead. they could never do it to someone else. That's not a punishment. If they are in prison, they couldn't do it ...

This is really meant for NaNoWriMo when you just need to write a story, like I pointed out. Are you determined enough?

I want to do it this year, anyone my age? How did you do it? Homework and that...

A lot of people, just sit down at a computer, especially in NaNoWriMo, and think: "I am going to write a novel!" Then think: "...What About?" Is this writer's block ...

This looks like a great book, I must add it to my 'to buy' list...

Great! Be sure to put capitals however: 'Wine glass on the kitchen table, Ninety percent empty. pills - three white,

>I wish I had joined this! It's going really well and looks fun! Oh well... Too late to catch up. I'll just read it and ssee if I get some ...

Hiya! Lyrics? The most random song I have ever heard!... ... ... ... excellent! I thought it was really fun, and you're going to sing it? Good for you! See ...

Hiya! Sorry I only have time for a short crit, so no grammar, but here goes: The characters are great. I think the development is spot on, no worries there, ...

Hiya! I like the message that you wanted to get across, but to be honest, this doesn't feel like a poem. I can see more of dramatic writing than a ...