Aedomir

Thanks... I might keep Aganost, in fact, ye. He could be the leader of the exiles why Aedomir was gone. Maybe... I'l;l give it some thought.

I see where you're coming from. But their life is over? They are dead! They never knew they had a life, but by keeping them alive they forced to and ...

Perhaps not that extreme but ye. lol

Ye, I'd agree with you. Maybe post a selected extract frm your novel up here? We could give you some pointers and tips. Up to you, :-)

Wow! I'd love to enter that! Maybe give the first chapter to my novel... wow!

What's in the journal? Sorry if I sound a bit... behind.

Snoink has a point. Just because you 'finished' it doesn't mean it needs to publsihed straight away. Read it once, twice and edit edit edit! You may even find yourself ...

Hiya! Thanks for that! I'm only rewriting chapter one, but that won't be a for a few montha yet I reckon. I jsut don't like it. Forget about Aganost and ...

(the golden hall! That's it!)

I tell you what could work, he meets someone who says they are related to him, but he doesn't believe it. Both people could do pieces in first person/.

lol, ye I suppose so.

Ye. Trouble is, high fantasy can go either way. Take LotR and Eragon. There is no comparison.

Why is everyone so good-looking? It's not fair. I always look like a real prat in pictures, but I don't have a better one, at least, one that I don't ...

Aww! 2007! My best work and my only work has been '08. lol, oh well!

Edit: Name: Simon Age: 27 Race: Elder? What's that? lol Appearance: Brown hair, tallish, blue eyes Personality: Friendly, cheerful, outgoing, social... History: Erm. He was born and became and Elder! ...