Aedomir

Oh, good good!

lol, ye. The Ride of the Rohirrim I think it beautiful. The way the camera moves, and how Theoden knows very few will survive. Yet they ride on. "DEATH!"

Wow, lol. These are great. Up 109%? Wow! Let's hope it continues!

Finally, the moon sank into the black, shapeless figure of the misty yonder, and a morning sun glazed the land in a rich spell. Seridon’s words spoke of foul times, ...

If it is too short, think... Have I rushed it? Is ther more to tell? Subplots? All writers use these, as a way to keep a reader intereste AND bulk ...

It's all on the blog, lol. Both blogs, the one on YWS and te one on my webbie. I know, I know... guilt has already claimed me... Still, thanks very ...

Hehe! I really like it! Nice style, catchy and all the rest. I can't oofer ConCrit here. lol, I agree with lucky. :-D ~D'Aedomir~

~Aedomir~ Aedomir's face just froze. He had no idea what this woman was on about, or more so, why she was on about it. Was she mad? He said nothing ...

I haven't noticed anything, what types of problems are they?

Sorry, but that was uncalled for. Nate told me that I had been banned for an extra four days (7 in total)... which doesn't make any sense because three days ...

That's a good point. I know someone at schoo, initials: P. ENNIS :lol: I am so immature!

Thanks! Don't worry, I like feedback more than anything, grammar I don't worry about too much.

The box stunk of toilet tramp.

if you're sure... let me know when you post something up.

I just reviewed it! Very good! The dialogue was great.