AdventurerDaniel

Okay first of all look up the Dark I Know Well because this song is a poetic version of that song in my opinion. It's very aggressive and I admire ...

Okay that was awesome I'm not a great photographer but your gift for knowing when to take a picture is apparent. I especially enjoyed your focus on the sky and ...

Okay so first things first there are two things the name of the project and the name for a warrior for it are two different things one means living sword. ...

I really liked this poem it does speak to something fragile within people, I don't really think to be honest that a toy soldier is quite fragile enough. Maybe a ...

I really liked this poem but at the same time the wording confused and baffled me but for some odd reason it did seem to some up the heat of ...

A Poem by a fellow YWS user inspired me to write this. Oh kind and ignorant child how fortunate you truly are to have not lived long enough to see ...

I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem if not some of the wording. "Intoxicate my liver" just doesn't even sound right I won't lie it was very abrupt and lacked ...

Just a poem I wrote for a poetry reading wrote in like five minutes. Schroedinger place his cat in a box. He as well placed a vial of poison inside ...

I won't lie I have also observed the odd tendency of humanity to do the opposite of what they are told and I rather hate to do this but a ...

I enjoyed reading this poem I'm terrible at writing poetry so please don't take my opinion too seriously. I do, however, happen to write monologues and one thing when writing ...

A rather brilliant poem it actually reminded of "Nothing Gold Can Stay" by Robert Frost it lamented the sorrow of beauty lost and how it's some what inevitable but it's ...

I loved this poem I wish it was just a bit longer I would love to turn this song into a poem it deserves it the rhyme scheme is perfect ...

I loved it though I would suggest shortening some lines for a more aesthetically pleasing look otherwise it flows very well and tells a great story.

I don't write much poetry and what I do write I seldom like. Actually to be more honest most poetry I write I hate,which makes the fact that my teacher ...

I like the flow of this poem for two reasons at some parts there wasn't much of one and at others I felt it should be rapped to a very ...