Adu05

Thanks for the feedback. I felt that using metaphors or similes would take away from the reality of the situation, however I will take this into consideration for my future ...

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Thank you for leaving a review! I felt like adding more stanzas might dilute the issue and i might wander off from what I'm really trying to say that's why ...

Thanks for leaving a review! "the numbers etched into her waist" were a way of me showing that she measures the size so much, the numbers are sort of ingrained ...

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely look into the punctuation.

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Hi! a lot of you pointed out punctuation so i made a few changes.... i'm still pretty new to this site so i was having some trouble with formatting and ...

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