AdrianaConnor

Nice story. There were only a few things that I noticed in your writing that were odd or uncorrect, but they were all just little editing things that you probably ...

If language and/or violence offends you, please read no further. This is part one of the prologue that I've written for a story; I'll be posting the next two parts ...

... Wha? Okay. I liked it. I can say that much. I also liked how you actually used proper grammer while making it sound drunken and sloppy, and I enjoyed ...

... Wow. I really like this story, omgsh mikey. I loved the way that you weren't afraid to tell it like it was, you know? You weren't afraid to show ...

It's people like you that make this website worth waiting through the five minutes that it takes to load up. I love it when there're poems in here that I ...

This is a quick beginning for a story that I threw together in about a week. Feel free to rip it apart until it's raw and bleeding. It was just ...

Wow. Just, wow. I really liked this, ashleylee. First of all, I loved the title. I haven't even read the next parts of the book yet, and I can already ...

I thought that this was brilliant, Kylan. Usually, when there's a story with a lot of details and similes, it bores me after all, but I couldn't stop reading story ...