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Hola, purplepastelpretty, mi amiga, que tal? Er... sorry. I laspe into Spanish a lot. It looks like you've got a good idea for a children's book here. I'm just thinking... ...

Hi! I just want to start off by saying that I thought your story was very interesting. The whole thing about Jake and Hail running away from the orphanage and ...

Hey, LoVeLeSs. I'm sorry that you had to go to the hospital and stuff; that really sucks. Anyway. I saw your story on the main page, figured, 'yeah, why not?,' ...

Wow, KJ. It looks like you've got your own personal fanclub. :) And wow ! When you said that you were throwing in an enormous twist, I expected something bad ...

Thank you so much for shooting me a PM about this, KJ. I really appreciated it. I'm just going to mention a few things that I noticed. Just to start ...

Hey, angels-symphony! I really like where this story is going so far; it's quite interesting. You don't say very much about the characters- who they are, what they look like, ...

Hey, KJ! Nice to talk to you again. :) I've said this before, and I'll say it again: I love your writing. 'The Experiment' is one of my favorite stories ...

Hey, GreatEscape! I like where your story is going so far... Danielle sounds like a bitch. You were able to get that across pretty clearly. I can't really think of ...

Hey, OverEasy! I saw this on the main page and read through all of the chapters, figuring that I might as well, and I was glad that I did. I ...

Okay, ThornedRose, I really like where this story is going so far. I agree with everything that Kara said, what with the infodumps and not enough showing, and I'm just ...

So, crazyforyou, I like your idea so far. Even though it wasn't exciting and/or gory (two of my favorite things), it still kept my attention. You were good at portraying ...

... Nice. I really liked this story, KJ. When you said that you were trying to make Katherine kind of childish and adult-like at the same time, I was thinking, ...

Okay. You might want to do some work on grammar before you post another story up here. I'm not trying to be mean, but it's the truth; your writing was ...

Hey, ashleylee! I noticed this chapter right when I came onto the website and spent the better part of my day reading the whole entire story from the preface to ...

I have only three words for you: Find. A. Publisher. Your work is wicked awesome; I love it! I love how you show Wren's relationships with the other characters so ...