Adriana

I so loved this!! It is simple, short and real... It flows perfectly and the rhymes are not forced. You really did a great job! I could not runaway, Even ...

WOW! It is simple, short, yet full of emotion. She forgave him for everything but now when she wanted to forgive him the most… she could not. I loved that ...

First of all, you did a great job here. I really think you should introduce Cameron's character at the beginning. You know, to make us emphatize with him and, consequently, ...

That's great! There are a few things, though... But I say I get in there some day Get back all my secrets I said I'd take to the grave Are ...

That's amazing! It is simple just like the wind, flows perfectly and is extremely real. I loved the part: Grasses wave greetings as it goes past, moving in waves of ...

So loooved it! Hmmm... I don't know if it's just me being too much sensitive, but I really think your poem sounds like a swing... Maybe it's the repetition of ...

Wow... When I saw your age I couldn't believe it... I mean, this is such a hard theme to discuss, and you do it soooo well. Anyway, you did a ...

It is really good! But, like every other story, it can get even better... Her mind holds no innocence nothing is pure I think it should have some punctuation between ...

Hahahaha I so loved it!!! You make us fell afraid of something before we can even identify it. It is funny (at the end, of course) and extremely real (you ...

Don't laugh but... I'm in love with your poem!! It's soooo perfect! The confusion in it just makes us get close to the character, to emphatise... I loved the lines: ...

This is SO great! It flows perfectly, has a good title, a good rhyme... And there are two things it reminded me of: Sweeney Todd, for the name of the ...

I SOOO loved it!! Wow! There's something I want to say though... In this part: A hole of time, A hole a space, A hole that leads to endless places." ...

I so liked it!!! First of all the picture. Sooo good. It gives us the idea of the poem before we could even start to read it. I just got ...

I'm not sure I got it right... Maybe it's my english skills that are not good yet (I'm brazilian), but I found it very confusing. Maybe it was your idea ...

I really liked the story! But you should definitely change the title. Also, I think you should rewrite the first paraghaph. It is a litle bit confusing and repetitive. You ...