Adriana

First of all, I'm sorry it took me too long to read it. I HAD to sleep, it was a hard day. Okay, your story... It's soooo good! Now I'm ...

Great story!!!! I simply love it. Your words at the begining, they are so good and add so much to the story! I just think you should sepparate it in ...

I love it!! At the end I was almost crying, really! I couldn't stop reading your story, which is great... I wish to know more about Jordan... How did he ...

This was the best EVER! I could finally get who is the "Lady", emphatize with the boy, AND with her brother. I guess you could describe a little better Evelyn's ...

Okay, I'm sorry but you lost me here . . . I don't know for sure if I can imagine Evelyn as a child, or a teenage, an adult... Maybe ...

I so love it!!! Well, I won't comment the grammar because I'm not an expert on that, as you know... I really wanted to know more about the mother. I ...

Guys, I know this subject is hard to discuss. Like I said, this story really happened and I just wanted to share it with you. I know there are a ...

My name is Eileen Roberts. Two months ago I gave birth to a beautiful girl named Jordan. When I was 17 weeks pregnant, after a common ultrasound, the doctor told ...

Do you want to make me cry or what??!!! I loved it!! I hear myself gasp Then I start to cry I want myself to stop But I fail on ...

Well, usually the names just appear in my mind, totally without explanation. But when I can't decide I look at those baby names sites. My favourite is The site is ...

Well, usually the names just appear in my mind, totally without explanation. But when I can't decide I look at those baby names sites. My favourite is The site is ...

I so love this!! I'm not that much into Jedi stories, but yours is so perfect! I loved the way you described Judy, her thoughts about her father... The way ...

WELCOME HERE, GUYS!! Well, I'm new here too so I'm saying by experience that everyone will be really nice to you. Share your stories with us and we will try ...

Well, I agree with everything you said here... But this doesn't sound like a poem at all... I'm terribly sorry if that sounds offensive, but that's what I feel... Look, ...

Well, first of all, congratulations! It is a great great poem, but I think the major problem with it is the punctuation. when I turn back] please take of the ...