AdoxagraphyAngelus

Hi! I'm Kinzee! :) It's really nice to meet you! I know you'll love YWS- it seems like everyone does. :) Everyone here is super nice and helpful. If you ...

This poem was interesting, to say the least. :) It seems like you wrote down really pretty pink and blue thoughts. I really enjoyed reading this. :) Tranquility, peace, clarity. ...

Hey. :) I did enjoy reading this poem, but there are a few things you could do to make it better. :) First off, the stanzas were different lengths, which ...

Woot woot! :D Though, my poems really were horrible... XP I only wrote one that I actually liked.

Hey. :) Kinzee here to review. :) Okay, my favorite thing about this poem had to be how you started off each stanza. It seemed like a very clever way ...

d Don%u2019t listen too closely for she%u2019s singing her Suicide song again Comma with a pocket full of posies knotted through her belt loop and ashes [ashes] powdered in her ...

I really enjoyed your poem. :) It was written well, but, as always, there are a few things that I'd like to point out. There are two stanzas that don't ...

I really liked this poem. :) You used good metaphors, very creatively, and it was written well. I couldn't really find any grammatical or punctuation errors, so kudos to you ...

This is really good, Micksters. Since I know nothing about drawing... Well done. :)

I love how this shows how shallow society is today. Everyone's so negative and can't just be pleasant to one another. I loved this poem. Wonderful job.

The Entrance aroma- it's never been right - Consider changing this to a comma. never smelled of home. I'm walking on eggshells avoiding the fight. Perhaps change this to avoiding ...

That was really, really sweet and cute. :) I don’t recall, but mother says that once I was small And my pillow would be the hem of her dress; I ...

This was written really well. It sounded so full of happiness. Reading things that are happy, which I rarely ever do, makes me happy. Wonderful job. :)

I really enjoyed reading this. :) It was beautifully written, but there are still just a few small nitpicks in there. :) Press pause on the remote, the one in ...

Thunder claps, the sky grows dark. Bring on the rain. Lightning where is the spark? Like the other reviewers said, this line doesn't quite make sense. He has been put ...